Friday, October 26, 2007

Mystery Book Review: Ana's Arrow by Riley Evans

Mysterious ReviewsMysterious Reviews, mysteries reviewed by the Hidden Staircase Mystery Books, has written a review of Ana's Arrow by Riley Evans. For our blog readers, we are printing it first here in advance of its publication on our website.Ana's Arrow by Riley Evans

Ana's Arrow by Riley Evans

StoryWright Books (Trade Paperback)
ISBN-10: 0-974142-2-6 (0974146226)
ISBN-13: 978-0-9741462-2-5 (9780974146225)
Publication Date: November 2007
List Price: $13.95

Synopsis (from the publisher): A young priest who has gone out for a winter night's jog is found with an arrow through the neck. Connections to the murder weapon bring attorney Tom Spaulding under suspicion. Tom's belief in his innocence is challenged as he delves into the shared dream in which his lover, Ana Frye, is revealed as the vengeful incarnation of the Goddess Diana. Was he driven by ancient powers to kill the priest? Or could he have committed a crime of passion after Ana and the priest confessed an affair? The ruthless manipulations of his enemies, the tortures and degradations inflicted upon him, become a hideous barrier to his battle for justice and redemption. Helpless in jail, desperate as he defends himself in court, he bares to you the deepest misgivings of his mind and the most tender loyalties of his heart. You must decide which of his worlds are real, which of his nightmares are true, and whether he is guilty or innocent.

Review: Riley Evans' decidedly odd legal thriller, Ana's Arrow, asks the reader to determine the fate of the narrator, western Kansas attorney Tom Spaulding: Is he guilty of murdering a priest with an arrow that belonged to his wife, or is he innocent of the crime of which he is accused?

The gimmick of Ana's Arrow, and yes it is merely a gimmick, is that at the end of the book the outcome of the trial of Tom Spaulding is not known. Readers can register their opinion online and presumably at some point in the future, the true verdict will be revealed. The real question is, will anyone care?

There are so many issues with this book it's hard to know where to begin. The concept of allowing the reader to play the role of a jury member and proffer their verdict is intriguing. But the trial doesn't start until well into the second half of the book and up to that point the narrative is ponderous to the point of being unreadable. It's likely a lot of potential jurors will drop out long before jury selection begins.

Riley Evans tries to imbue in Tom Spaulding a complex set of favorable and unfavorable characteristics in an attempt to appear impartial to potential jurors (i.e. readers). But the effort isn't successful. Tom is not a likeable character. He claims to be in love with Ana, but he's far more in lust than anything else. His concern for her is directly proportional to the physical pleasure he derives from her company. He's arrogant, egocentric, and at times condescending to his friends and colleagues. He's also vulnerable and, especially late in the book, humiliated in the presence of his peers. This combination of (perceived) strength and weakness in the end comes across as merely pathetic.

The mythological aspect to the story also has possibilities, but is handled so clumsily and inaccurately that it loses any credibility. Are Ana and her best friend Helen the embodiment of their ancient Greek counterparts, or are their actions simply psychotic episodes in the mind of Tom Spaulding?

Then there are the distinctly unfinished, or maybe just poorly edited, facets to the book. Subplots abound but are infrequently tied together, more rarely concluded, and in some cases seem so tangential to be inconsequential. Characters are introduced with some apparent significance to the plot, then disappear, are killed, or otherwise are sidelined, with no resolution to their being.

It's entirely possible that all the noted flaws in Ana's Arrow are intentional, that the book is a metaphor for an actual murder trial, one where hours of mundane, tedious details and mind-numbing background material suddenly evolve into brief moments of riveting testimony. If this is the case, the author has achieved his goal brilliantly.

Special thanks to Storywright Books for providing a copy of Ana's Arrow for this review.

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